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CHAPTER 1 — THE WHISPER THAT SHOOK MY SOUL

For weeks, I told myself I was worrying over nothing.

Children have strange habits.

Some sing to themselves.

Some talk to imaginary friends.

Some spend forever in the bathtub pretending they're pirates or mermaids.

That's exactly what I believed my six-year-old granddaughter, Lily, was doing every morning.

She would wake before anyone else.

Quietly slip into the upstairs bathroom.

Lock the door.

And stay there.

Sometimes twenty minutes.

Sometimes forty.

Sometimes nearly an hour.

Whenever I knocked, she answered the same way.

"I'm almost done, Grandma."

Her voice always sounded cheerful enough.

Too cheerful.

I wanted to believe her.

After all, since my son Ethan remarried two years earlier, life had finally begun settling down again.

His first wife—Lily's mother—had died in a terrible highway accident when Lily was only three.

The grief nearly destroyed him.

Then came Rebecca.

Gentle.

Patient.

Always smiling.

She seemed to love Lily as if she were her own daughter.

Everyone admired her.

Even I did.

I often stayed at their house to help with cooking, cleaning, and babysitting while Ethan worked long shifts at the hospital.

Rebecca never complained.

"You're part of this family," she'd always say.

Those words warmed my heart.

But lately...

Something felt wrong.

Lily had become quieter.

She no longer laughed while drawing.

She stopped asking me to braid her hair.

At dinner she barely looked up from her plate.

And every morning...

The bathroom.

One rainy Tuesday, instinct won.

I waited until Lily went inside.

The sound of the lock clicked.

Water started running.

Five minutes.

Ten.

Fifteen.

I couldn't ignore the feeling anymore.

I turned the doorknob.

To my surprise...

It wasn't locked.

The door slowly creaked open.

Steam drifted through the room.

"Lily?"

No answer.

I stepped inside.

Then I froze.

She wasn't in the shower.

She wasn't playing.

She stood inside the empty bathtub fully dressed.

Her tiny hands desperately rubbed and twisted the hem of her blue dress over and over until the fabric looked ready to tear apart.

She stared down at herself as though trying to erase something no one else could see.

Her lips trembled.

Her little shoulders shook.

I rushed toward her.

"Honey... what are you doing?"

She gasped.

The color drained from her face.

She looked at me with pure terror.

Then leaned close enough that I could barely hear her whisper.

"Grandma..."

"If I scrub hard enough..."

"...maybe she won't smell him anymore."

Every hair on my body stood up.

"What do you mean?"

Lily burst into tears.

She covered her mouth with both hands.

Before she could answer...

Footsteps echoed in the hallway.

May you like

Rebecca.

And the smile on her face disappeared the instant she realized I was standing beside Lily.

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