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Chapter 4 - The Betrayal of the Saints

Clickbait Hook: The whole village was hiding a dark secret, and they thought an old woman would never find out. They were dead wrong.Eleanor sat on the floor of her pantry, the ledger open in her lap, tears of pure rage streaming down her wrinkled cheeks. Her son hadn't died in a random accident. He had discovered what the village elders were doing.

Crimson Valley wasn't just a quiet mountain town; it was a highly organized money-laundering sanctuary for international syndicates, disguised as a peaceful agricultural community. The "Harvest" wasn't crops—it was human trafficking and illicit contraband smuggled across the northern border through the mountain passes. Arthur had been a border patrol agent. He had found out, and they had executed him to keep him quiet.

Suddenly, the power went out.

The soft hum of the refrigerator died, plunging the house into pitch blackness. The only light came from the moon reflecting off the snow outside.

Eleanor froze. The wind outside had died down, meaning the power outage wasn't caused by the storm.

Creak.

The sound came from the front porch. Someone was walking softly, trying to suppress the sound of the loose floorboards. Then came another sound from the back door.

They were surrounding her.

Eleanor scrambled to her feet, shoving the ledger into her cardigan. She grabbed her late husband’s old double-barreled shotgun from behind the pantry door, her hands shaking so violently she could barely load the two heavy brass shells into the chambers.

The front door crashed open with a violent splintering sound.

"Eleanor!" a voice called out into the darkness. It was Chief Miller, but his voice lacked any semblance of professional decorum. It was laced with malice. "We know what those men left you. We know you have the ledger. Give it to us, and we can make this quick. You're an old woman, Eleanor. You've lived a long life. Don't make your final moments painful."

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Through the darkness of the hallway, Eleanor saw the silhouettes of three men entering her living room, flashlight beams cutting through the shadows. Beside Miller stood two villagers she had known for years—men who had helped repair her roof, men who smiled at her at the local grocery store.

They weren't neighbors. They were monsters.

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