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Chapter 2 - THE GHOST OF KOWLOON AND THE NIGERIAN MARKETDaniel didn't answer. He couldn't.

Those words hit him not with the force of a fist, but with the cold, heavy realization of a gavel coming down in a courtroom where he was already condemned.

You don’t have to know somebody to pray for them.

In Daniel’s world, everything had a ledger. You didn't give a dollar without expecting two back, or at least expecting the recipient to know whose boot was on their neck. Affection was a currency; loyalty was a contract written in blood and notarized by fear. The last time Daniel had prayed, he had been twelve years old in a cramped, oil-stained apartment in Busan, watching his father cough up dark red into a porcelain sink while praying to a god who had apparently checked out for the fiscal year.

Before Daniel could find his voice, the door swung open again, and Dr. Rebecca Sloan strode in, clutching a fresh chart against her chest.

She stopped dead. Her eyes flicked from Daniel’s rigid posture to the small, soaking-wet girl sitting on the edge of the dying boy’s bed.

"What is this?" Dr. Sloan’s professional composure cracked just a fraction. "Security! How did a visitor—"

"Stop," Daniel said. His voice wasn't loud, but it had the razor-sharp edge of a meat cleaver.

Dr. Sloan froze.

Amara didn't seem bothered by the doctor either. She patted Evan’s hand once—just a light, rhythmic tap—and then slid off the mattress, her sneakers squeaking softly on the floor.

"I have to go find Lily," Amara said, looking up at Daniel with polite seriousness. "Mrs. Carter is going to be mad if I'm late, and Grandma Nneka said if I make the neighbor wait in the car too long, he will start listening to that talk radio station about politics, and then he gets very grumpy."

She turned toward the door, hoisted her heavy backpack higher onto her shoulders, and paused. She looked back at Evan, who was actually trying to turn his head to watch her leave.

"He's going to be okay," Amara said softly to the room at large. "He just needs to drink more water with lime. My grandma gives that to us when the fever tries to live in our heads."

With that, she trotted out of the room, her yellow raincoat swishing against the doorframe.

Dr. Sloan stared after her, dumbfounded. "Who was that? Was that a patient’s sibling? We have strict quarantine protocols on this floor—Evan’s immune system is practically non-existent. If she brought in a rhinovirus—"

"She didn't bring a virus," Daniel interrupted. He was still staring at the spot on the white sheet where the rag doll lay.

The doll was crude. The fabric smelled faintly of fried plantains, red palm oil, and laundry dried in a tropical sun—a scent so violently alive and distant from the chemical-bleach smell of Lakefront Children’s Hospital that it felt like an intrusion from another planet.

Daniel reached down with two fingers, picked up the little denim doll, and turned it over. Tucked into the small fabric pocket on the doll’s chest was a tiny, folded piece of yellow lined paper.

He unfolded it. Written in clumsy, round children’s handwriting with a blunt purple crayon were four words:

God is watching you.

Daniel’s jaw tightened until the bone clicked. He folded the paper back up and slipped it into his breast pocket, right next to his heart.

"Dr. Sloan," Daniel said, his voice dropping an octave. "Find out who brought that girl into this building. Check every camera from the lobby to the fourth floor."

"Daniel, she's just a lost child," Dr. Sloan sighed, rubbing her temples. "Security probably let her slip past during the shift change when the ambulance doors opened. I'll have a nurse sweep the halls and send her to social services to find her family."

"No," Daniel said, turning his cold, obsidian eyes toward her. "Find her family. Bring me her file. All of it."

"Why?"

"Because," Daniel said, walking over to the window and watching the red tail-lights of Chicago traffic blur through the rain, "nothing in this city happens by coincidence at twelve o'clock at night. And nobody walks into a room where a child is dying unless they were sent to deliver a message."

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"A message from whom?" Dr. Sloan asked, half-scornful, half-exhausted. "A seven-year-old?"

"From someone who knows more about saving a life than forty-three specialists in eleven countries," Daniel muttered.

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