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Chapter 1

The first slap echoed through the grand foyer of the Ferrer mansion like a crack of thunder.

Five-year-old Renata fell onto the marble floor as her tiara rolled to the feet of Vanessa Luján, the woman who had been walking into that house for months as if she were already its new mistress.

Adriana rushed to her daughter's side.

Renata's cheek was burning red, her lips trembling, and her eyes filled with confusion. She couldn't understand why a grown woman would hurt her while her own father stood by without moving.

"Mom... I just wanted to give her the flower," she whispered.

Vanessa brushed off her silver evening gown with a look of disgust.

"She stained my dress before the gala. This child ruins everything."

Mauricio Ferrer didn't even ask whether Renata was hurt.

He simply adjusted the cufflinks on his shirt and glanced at his watch.

"Adriana, control your daughter. Some very important investors will be here today."

Those words shattered something inside her.

For six years, Adriana had endured Mauricio's humiliation, her mother-in-law Beatriz's constant insults, and Vanessa's increasingly open presence in their home.

She had pretended to be a woman with no money, no influential family, and nowhere else to go.

She did it because she believed Renata deserved to grow up with a father.

But seeing her daughter lying on the floor made her realize that the family she had fought so hard to preserve was nothing more than a beautifully decorated cage.

Beatriz walked in from the dining room.

Instead of helping the little girl, she inspected Vanessa's dress.

"How embarrassing. Adriana never knew how to raise her."

Then, just as she had done so many times before, she raised her hand to intimidate her daughter-in-law.

This time...

Adriana caught her wrist in midair.

Beatriz's eyes widened in outrage.

"Let go of me."

"Never raise your hand against my daughter... or against me... ever again."

Mauricio stormed toward them.

"Have you forgotten who pays for this house?"

Adriana picked up Renata and held her close.

"No. You're the one who forgot who I really am."

The three of them burst into mocking laughter.

Adriana looked at the simple red thread tied around her wrist, one she had worn since before her wedding.

Mauricio always mocked it as a cheap trinket from a street market.

Beatriz called it "a poor person's lucky charm."

Neither of them knew what it truly meant.

Before giving up the Salvatierra family name, Adriana had made a promise to her father.

She would live without bodyguards, without access to the family fortune, and without any special privileges—just to discover whether Mauricio truly loved her.

Her father agreed...

But with one condition.

The day she cut the red thread... she would stop hiding who she really was.

Adriana bit through the thread.

She took an old phone from her purse—a phone that had remained switched off for years—and dialed a number.

"Tomás," she said when someone answered, "tell my father that Adriana Salvatierra has come home."

Mauricio's expression shifted ever so slightly.

"What kind of nonsense is this?"

"Freeze every operation related to the Ferrer Group," Adriana continued calmly. "Loans, guarantees, contracts, trusts... everything."

Mauricio laughed, although his voice no longer sounded quite as confident.

Then he threw a folder onto the table.

"Fine. Sign the divorce papers and get out. But Renata stays. Vanessa wants her to be the flower girl at tonight's gala at the Imperial Reforma Hotel."

Renata clung tightly to her mother's neck.

Adriana picked up the pen, signed the documents with her full legal name, and pushed them back across the table.

Adriana Salvatierra de Ferrer.

Mauricio didn't even bother reading the signature.

Before walking away, Adriana looked him straight in the eyes.

"Enjoy the gala. It'll be the last night anyone important opens a door for you."

A few hours later...

Renata would walk into the most exclusive ballroom in Mexico, crying.

And before hundreds of the country's most powerful business leaders...

She would point directly at Vanessa...

...before throwing her arms around the man everyone believed was completely untouchable—

and calling him...

"Grandpa."

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